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©2007-2009 *Kazuv
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Happy Birthday, Rin! :D

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Aww TY~! :hug: 8D *pokes her boobies* 8D 8D

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SHe's cute

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niice

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Happy birthday to us all huh? ^_^

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Rin, you lucky bugga.

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Ah! A new angle? Good.

I figure you're most likely to catch comments on this pic, so the rest is regarding all of your arts.

Your work is all pretty good. You've an excellent grasp of the basics (I wish I could draw hands as well, and I draw *by* hand) and the placement of belly (Understandable since you really like bellehs. I once tried to draw a pregnant woman and it looked like she'd stuffed a basketball up her shirt. That was a while back, but still...)

There are some things it's pretty clear you're ready to move up to working on, though, but haven't yet.

You've only got one or two drawlings from behind, and they're all at an angle, and only a few from the side as well- mostly you've got forwards angles from 'below' the subject. This is nice and consistent and always gives a good view of the character, but for characters you've already drawn that way a bunch of times (Chayli, that recurring priestess, etc.) you could probably stand to try drawing them from more and different perspectives. The one time you tried drawing Chayli's face from above, the nose came out looking really kwonky.

Poses- you've got a few. More recently you've got that breakdancing one, but mostly your people are all standing and kneeling. Might I recommend you draw a few crouching, or bending over to pick something up, or in the process of sitting down or jogging or something of the sort?

You seem to be ready to start trying to shade things more. It'll make them look a lot less flat (and they do, unfortunately, look rather flat right now). It'd be nice to get more of a sense of depth- and it would really help with some of those bellies where they look a bit odd with the no shadow stuff.

All that aside, a very nice set of artings. It doesn't hurt that I love the subject (pregnancy and pregnant women) quite a bit, and also that you treat it with both respect and a bit of quirky humor.

You do good, but I think you can do better- and I wanna see it. Plx?

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Too long. Didn't care.
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Yeah, nice angle! Aaaaaaaaaaaand, I wish I had pointy ears. XDD

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Ah!! long comments, overload of brain tissue!!

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